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Essay construction - thesis statement

Essay Construction

Thesis statement

You do not have a thesis statement.  Click here for more information

The arguments presented are not consistent with your thesis statement. Go to: Essay writing

Your thesis statement is too long. See: Essay writing LibGuide

Map the response to the essay question after telling the reader your position (called the thesis statement). See: Essay writing LibGuide

Thesis statement needs work. The thesis is the central idea of your paper around which all your evidence and claims are organised. See: Essay writing LibGuide

An excellent thesis statement. Well done.

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